Tuesday, October 5, 2010

Start with a Bang! Famous First Lines

I don’t know about you, but when I’m in a bookstore, deciding whether to buy a book, I have a fairly set ritual. First I read the jacket copy or back cover blurb, then, if I like what I’ve seen so far, I flip the book open and skim the first page.

For me, the first page makes or breaks a sale. Heck, often it’s the first line, which is why I enjoyed the American Book Review’s 100 Best First Lines from Novels.

Here are the Top 10.

1. Call me Ishmael. —Herman Melville, Moby-Dick (1851)

2. It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife. —Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice (1813)

3. A screaming comes across the sky. —Thomas Pynchon, Gravity's Rainbow (1973)

4. Many years later, as he faced the firing squad, Colonel Aureliano Buendía was to remember that distant afternoon when his father took him to discover ice. —Gabriel García Márquez, One Hundred Years of Solitude (1967; trans. Gregory Rabassa)

5. Lolita, light of my life, fire of my loins. —Vladimir Nabokov, Lolita (1955)

6. Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way. —Leo Tolstoy, Anna Karenina (1877; trans. Constance Garnett)

7. riverrun, past Eve and Adam's, from swerve of shore to bend of bay, brings us by a commodius vicus of recirculation back to Howth Castle and Environs. —James Joyce, Finnegans Wake (1939)

8. It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen. —George Orwell, 1984 (1949)

9. It was the best of times, it was the worst of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness, it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity, it was the season of Light, it was the season of Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair. —Charles Dickens, A Tale of Two Cities (1859)

10. I am an invisible man. —Ralph Ellison, Invisible Man (1952)



Isn’t it amazing how much (tone, voice, setting, plot) can be expressed in a single line? Reading this list reminded me why I've read some of these books, and why I'll never read others. What about you?

Don’t be fooled into thinking that this applies only to Classics. I pulled three books from my shelves, all published in the past five years. Check out how these talented ladies use their first lines:

“At the very beginning, she had seen his face and knew he would not let her live.”
Allison Brennan, Speak No Evil
No surprise that this book is about a twisted serial killer.

“When I was twelve years old I accidentally substituted salt for sugar in a cake recipe.”
Janet Evanovich, Twelve Sharp
If you haven’t read a Stephanie Plum novel before you still know immediately that she’s sort of off-kilter.

“Sometimes they went in with a flash and crash, but Lieutenant Gage always preferred stealth.”
Laura Griffin, Unstoppable (part of the anthology Deadly Promises)
We know immediately that Lt. Brewer is all about getting the job done.

Don’t forget: I’ll be posting a Q&A with Laura Griffin later this month!

How important do you consider first lines to be? As a reader, have you ever put down or picked up a book because of a first line? As a writer, do you spend time perfecting your first line?

Oh, and just for fun I’ve posted some of my own first lines on my blog.

11 comments:

Amanda Sablan said...

I agree that first lines are important but actually, I've bought many books by just liking what I've read in the middle. And now that I think about it, some of the books I've enjoyed have downright meh lines... Hmm.

Killer Chicks, heh heh. <3

JB Lynn said...

Amanda, you open books to the middle to decide whether to read them? How interesting!

Milo James Fowler said...

I've returned many a book to the shelves due to its lackluster first lines, and I hope such won't be the case when/if my work is ever carried by B&N.

JB Lynn said...

Milo -- Here's hoping you come up with that magical first sentence that turns your book into a best seller!

Jennifer Hillier said...

Awesome post, JB!

Here a couple of mine!

1. Three months.

2. Pain.

Um, do these even count as "lines"?

Jennifer Hillier said...

Good lord, I forgot to answer the question and my comment above was supposed to be posted on JB Lynn's blog, not here! I haven't had enough coffee.

I don't know that I've ever put a book down because of a first line, but I know I've definitely lost interest after a first page, maybe even a first paragraph. But I've definitely sweated over my own first lines, not that they're so awesome (as you can see from the examples posted above). I probably revise my opening paragraph 50 times more than any other part of the manuscript.

Joann Swanson said...

Great post, JB! I LOVE the first line of Libba Bray's GOING BOVINE: "The best day of my life happened when I was five and almost died at Disney World." I also like sort of innocuous first lines that are followed by some POW! sentences. I will definitely put a book down if the first sentence is poorly written. I figure if an author can't get the first words right they're probably not gonna get the others quite right either.

Angelica R. Jackson said...

I can appreciate a first line with a lot of impact, but I have to say I'm pretty patient; I'll give most books 5-10 pages. Unless there are too many horrifying mistakes or purple prosies, I'm willing to take a little time to decide. That's for published books--for critiques, I'm constantly telling people "your story starts on page 5" or page 11 or something.

If the first line is counted from the prologue, mine is:

"Where are you taking me?" I tried to plant my feet, but Miss Bonney roughly pulled me into motion again.

If it's the first line of Ch. 1, it's:

The boy's gaze burned into the back of my head, as if he could push me out the door with his will alone.

Jen Daiker said...

Ooo there were some excellent one's over here!!! I love!

Roland D. Yeomans said...

"He was born with the gift of laughter and the knowledge that the world was mad."

The first line to Sabatini's SCARAMOUCHE.

Like you, Jennifer, I beleive first lines are the essential hook to landing a reader.

Mine?

"It rained lies and death today."

Last lines are important as well. The great last lines to the movie, THE PROFESSIONALS :

"You bastard."

"Yes. In my case it was an accident of birth. But you're a self-made man."

I came here for the interview with your agent, but I really enjoyed this post as well, Roland

JB Lynn said...

Jennifer -- I'll take first lines anywhere. ;-)

I'm with you on revising that first paragraph a gazillion times.

Joann, -- lol, I lose faith in a writer if she/he can't at least hold my attn for the first line

Angelica -- Great first lines! Thanks for sharing!

Jen -- tx for stopping by!

Roland -- Great first line (and love that last!) Glad you enjoyed!