Tuesday, September 9, 2014

Teaser Tuesday - Bloodflow

Okay folks, sorry I'm late.  Here's a little piece of what I'm working on... and I'm almost done.  Just a few more chapters to rewrite, then some polishing, then sending it off to beta readers so they can tell me how awful... awesome it is. 

“Looks like you finally got your wish, Kruz,” Supervisory Agent Jim Klein said from the entrance to Randi’s cubicle.
Agent Miranda Kruz looked up from the reams of data laying across her desk.  Above them a different set of data stared at her from her monitor.   She’d been in the process of comparing the two to find disparities that might point toward a lead.  Of course, she’d been at the task for better than a week and hadn’t found a single thing with the odor of domestic terrorism.  Just a never-ending list of dates and numbers with no correlation to anything.  No one promised her work on the Terrorism Task Force would be fun.  Then again, no one told her it would consist of this much drudgery either.
Klein nodded at her work.  “You hate this paperwork shit.  Well, Tweeg wants you working in the field again.”  He tapped the clock on her desk.  “Starting… Geez, it that the time?  Kristen is going to kill me.”
He stared at her like she had a third eye on the end of her nose.  “What?  Right.  Tweeg just sent orders down from on high.  You’re on the Reynolds ‘murder’…”  He actually bothered to make air quotes. “…effective immediately.  Of course, as late as it is, he probably didn’t mean tonight.”
She wasn’t so sure.  If Deputy Director Anton Tweeg had anything to say about it, she’d work until the bats went to bed.  Still…
Tweeg wants me on an active case…

Randi really needs to be careful what she wishes for, but she'll learn that soon enough.  ;o)


Silver James said...

Oh, yeah. I can tell I'm going to enjoy beta reading this one! Now get busy, woman!

B.E. Sanderson said...

I've got 24 pages left to rewrite, and a scene I need to snip that is no longer relevant. By the end of the week, I hope.

Aisyah Putri Setiawan said...

Banned complain !! Complaining only causes life and mind become more severe. Enjoy the rhythm of the problems faced. No matter ga life, not a problem not learn, so enjoy it :)

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